I dont see how its any better than the first really?
Remove all your isolations and bicep curls, cut it down to three days, squat everyday, pull as much as you push, oh and one other thing not yet mentioned, if you want muscle and size, then you need to eat, a lot.
I used to train like you, in fact I was worse, then I woke up to the fact that for a beginner, bicept curls, lat pulldowns etc. are a waste of time. Sticking to compound movements will get you size and put on muscle in places you didnt even know you had.
Thats my 2c.